Thursday 13 July 2017

Immanence: A Poem

That I am here should be a blessing 

but I am only half here 

kept from full embodiment 
except as a dream, an ideal 
the fullness of a life that is beyond me 

yet still inside me

immanent

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    1. Thank you! I am unsure about my poems, so having you say that means a lot. x

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  2. Hello Therese! I just wanted to say I have been reading everything you write (and loving it so much!) and I´m sorry for not commenting more. (Sometimes, or always, it´s quite difficult to express my thoughts and feelings in a foreign language and I feel like I can´t really say what I want to, the way I want to. If that makes any sense.)

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    1. Hello Hilja! Thank you, I really appreciate you saying that. And I completely understand about the language issue. I really admire anyone who can communicate in more than one. It's an amazing skill and knowledge to have. I hope your summer is going well. :)

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